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God Just Viewed Your Story
Characters
- Aarav (Protagonist): 22 saal ka, college student. Social media addict. Uske life ki sabse badi problem yeh hai ki uski posts ko kam likes milte hain ya uski crush ne uski story nahi dekhi. Vo church jaata hai, lekin prayer time par bhi phone check karta rehta hai. Vo God se bas formalities ke liye baat karta hai.
- Pastor Mathew: Aarav ke church ke pastor. Vo modern hain aur technology samajhte hain.
- Riya: Aarav ki dost, jo thodi zyada serious Christian hai.
Shuruwat
Aarav church mein hai, pastor sermon de rahe hain on "Prayer is a conversation, not a monologue." Aarav bored hai. Vo secretly apne phone se Instagram scroll kar raha hai. Pastor ke bolne par, vo haan mein haan milate hue ek quick, half-hearted prayer karta hai: "God, please mere exams aache ho jayein. Amen." Aur phir usne apni crush ki nayi profile picture like kar di.
Inciting Incident (The Twist)
Instagram: god_the_almighty ne aapki story dekhi hai.
Aarav sochta hai yeh koi fake account hai. Usne profile check ki – profile picture blank thi, bio mein kuch nahi tha, posts zero the, lekin followers aur following angana tha (1.2B?). Usne use "Block" kar diya.
Instagram DM: god_the_almighty ne aapko ek message bheja hai. "Aapki kal ki prayer request suni. Exam ke liye padhai karni padegi, Aarav. Mere upar mat chhodna."
Aarav chillaya! Uske dimaag mein sawaal ghoomne lage. Ye kaun hai? Kaise usne prayer ka pata? Usne socha koi hacker hai. Usne apne dost Riya ko call kiya. Riya ne kaha, "Shayad God tumse baat karne ki koshish kar raha hai, tumhare medium se."
Climax (The Conversation)
Aarav ne dare maarte hue reply kiya: "Agar aap sach mein God ho toh proof do." 2 second baad hi reply aaya – ek voice note. Voice note mein usi ke padosi uncle ki aawaz thi, jo bol rahe the: "Beta Aarav, kal tumhare exam ka paper postpone ho gaya hai, notice board par laga dia hai." (Aarav ko pata tha yeh uncle kal se bahar gaye the, unhe koi pata nahi tha).
Aarav ka believe ho gaya. Ab usne apni sari tensions, apne darr, apne sawaal... sab DM karna shuru kar diya.
- "God, mujhe iss ladki se pyaar ho gaya hai, kya karu?"
Reply: "Pehle usse as a friend jaano. Usse bas emoji bhejne se kaam nahi chalega." - "God, mere parents mujhe samajhte hi nahi."
Reply: "Communication do-side hoti hai. Ye article padho. Phir unse baat karo." - "God, main future ke baare mein bahut anxious feel karta hu."
Reply: "Matthew 6:34. Kal ka din apne liye pareshan hoga... Aaj ke liye kaafi hai aaj ki museebaten."
Resolution (The Realization)
Aarav ko ehsaas hua ki God uska prayer sun raha tha hamesha se, lekin ab uska jawab de raha tha. Jawab hamesha miraculous nahi hota tha. Kabhi vo practical advice hoti thi, kabhi koi relevant Bible verse, kabhi use koi aisi cheez dikh jaati thi jo use guide karti.
Aakhiri scene mein, Aarav church mein hai. Pastor Mathew ke paas jaata hai aur kehta hai, "Pastor, aapne sahi kaha tha. Prayer ek conversation hai. Maine finally uski aawaz suni."
Pastor muskurate hue kehte hain, "Vo kabhi chup nahi tha, Aarav. Tumhari notification band thi."
Aarav apna phone nikaalta hai, "God_the_Almighty" ko "Unblock" karta hai aur uski profile ko "Close Friends" ki list mein add kar deta hai. Vo apni prayer ko ek real, heartfelt conversation bana deta hai.




wah kya story hai this story is too good
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